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@@ -324,14 +324,15 @@ Between existing Lisp implementations, it is ClojureScript's success
 --- as a mostly static language oriented around batch compilation and
 whole-program reloading --- that renders suspect a central claim of
 this paper: that Common Lisp and prioritizing interactive development
-will make SPA development easier.
+will make SPA development in Lisp easier and more practical than it
+currently is with ClojureScript.
 
 Only progress on the JACL project will confirm or disconfirm that
 suspicion. In the meantime, JACL development continues in the hope
 that Lisp-based SPA development with JACL will be \emph{at least} as
 practical and productive as it currently is with ClojureScript, but
-with the added benefit of access to historical Common Lisp-based
-techniques.
+with the added benefit of the special affordances of Common Lisp's
+design combined with access to successful historical techniques.
 
 \section{Design and Implementation}