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 % http://lisperator.net/slip/impl
 
 SLip [ref] is perhaps the most ambitious Common Lisp-on-JavaScript
-system to date, although it intentionally diverges from Common Lisp in
-some respects. Based originally on the compiler and bytecoded VM
-presented in PAIP [ref], SLip offers an impressive feature set, which
-includes the following and more:
+system to date with respect to the sheer number of features it
+offers. However, it intentionally diverges from Common Lisp in some
+respects. Based originally on the compiler and bytecoded VM presented
+in PAIP [ref], SLip features include:
 
 \begin{itemize}
   \item Self-hosting compiler