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@@ -231,15 +231,14 @@ what's capable of being read by the underlying, full-featured
 synchronous reader.
 
 Incidentally, SLip's reader is also synchronous, and its Emacs clone,
-ymacs, also includes a pre-reader as part of its Lisp interaction
+Ymacs, also includes a pre-reader as part of its Lisp interaction
 mode.
 
-Because JSCL includes no demonstration of embedding the REPL in an
-application, and because JSCL itself is compiled in batch through a
-synchronous process, the limitations of the pre-reader appear not to
-encumbered those who have used JSCL to date. However, the lack of a
-full-fledged asynchronous, embeddable reader severely limits JSCL as
-an interactive Lisp development environment.
+JSCL and SLip demonstrate that when the underlying reader facility is
+synchronous, a REPL cannot effectively be made available at run-time
+because of the asynchrony of input events in JavaScript. In the best
+case, the reader is only partially available through an a pre-reader
+that accumulates datums asynchronously.
 
 \subsubsection{Compiler organization}